This made me laugh. I think the weakest part was in the aside glance segment you had. You had them look at the camera too many times. But otherwise, a pretty solid joke and nice delivery.
This made me laugh. I think the weakest part was in the aside glance segment you had. You had them look at the camera too many times. But otherwise, a pretty solid joke and nice delivery.
Aw. I really like the way you conveyed the emotions here. And I must honestly say that I wasn't expecting the way you took it. Pleasantly surprised.
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